With autumn comes the changes
in the colour of the trees
As they glow with inner fire
before leaping on the breeze
Then a symphony of sounds
in dry rattle, crunchy squeeze
Until fading life escapes them
back to earth return the leaves.
Our relationship was like them
once fresh, young, the moment seize
With time, a strength and steadiness
for both comfort and to please
Now a final burst of colour
springing forth despite unease
But from all the pain and heartache
my soul shrivels up and leaves.
[ this is my response to Pooky’s Poetry Prompt 23 – One Word Title ]
Colourful thoughts.. Beautiful.
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It was autumn back home when I Ieft, so colour was on my mind for this theme. 😀
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And you used it perfectly here!
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I adore the autumn. You captured it perfectly.
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Thankyou! It is a beautiful time of year, something very grounding about the plants retreating ready for winter, but still providing colour and much joy.
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Although it’s funny that you wrote it in the UK in the spring (says she who wrote a poem about snow on a sunny day..)
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All was autumn when I left the Southern Hemisphere, so that is my last memories of home which were channelled after I came up with the title word of inspiration. What’s your excuse 😉 do you like the white winter snow!
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I like the way you’ve managed to use that pun in a serious way.
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Thankyou. I was intentionally focused on using the different meanings in the same poem.
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You have done it in such a way as to make that clear, without it being flippant.
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