Weekday Mornings. (Second Considered Metre).

The morning school cries
As children walk by
A musical sound
Young innocence crowned
While I eat my porridge
Obtaining more knowledge
Of current affairs
And planned home repairs

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[ my second response to Pooky’s Poetry Prompt 35, to consider metre. This feels incomplete, but “things” have come up and I need to leave this be ]

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