the part where you lost control

Her words hit me like a prophecy,
i think i am ready to lose control.
give up all my struggling,
find a way out of the hole
that I created, digging down,
and building walls that surround

let go, release, no more holding on
to safety,
don’t fear
the pain,
those fires will not hurt you,
only strengthen
and change
by burning off the layers
that weighed you down

She said “you are free”
“as soon as you choose to be”


[this is my response to Luca’s challenge at:]


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